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tiller2

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Washington DC

Jun 13th, 2014 06:20 AM        

I haven't posted a song in a while, but have just written a couple. A major/minor Marley-esque progression, with the chorus repeated after each verse. Comments/suggestions?<br /> <br /> <br /> I’m Up/The Internet’s Down<br /> <br /> Chorus:<br /> I am up (up up) ’cause the internet’s down (down down)<br /> Baby I’m up (up up) ’cause the internet’s down (down down)<br /> <br /> 1.<br /> Radio said this morning, a disaster in the news,<br /> The internet that’s our everything, seems to have blown a fuse.<br /> Cruisin the world wide wonderful, like a dog without a leash,<br /> I look up at the morning sky, like a bird who’s been released<br /> <br /> Repeat chorus<br /> <br /> 2.<br /> Wi-fi, hi-def, you are gonna be my death,<br /> Mobile data plan, stop redefining who I am.<br /> Just ’cause you got a hammer don’t mean that I’m your nail.<br /> You can be jack rabbit, I’m happy as a snail<br /> <br /> Bridge (major key):<br /> Passionate not rational,<br /> Humans are illogical,<br /> Physical not digital,<br /> Half a glass is almost full.<br /> <br /> Repeat chorus<br /> <br /> Repeat v.2



tiller2

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Washington DC

Jun 26th, 2014 10:56 AM        

tiller not sad nobody reads his song lyrics. Today new member of SAW... Songwriters' Association of Washington! ;^)



Martin G



Canada

Sep 18th, 2014 12:08 PM        

I need to hear the music :(



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