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tiller2
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Jun 13th, 2014 06:20 AM   Edit   Profile   Print Topic   Search Topic

I haven't posted a song in a while, but have just written a couple. A major/minor Marley-esque progression, with the chorus repeated after each verse. Comments/suggestions?


I’m Up/The Internet’s Down

Chorus:
I am up (up up) ’cause the internet’s down (down down)
Baby I’m up (up up) ’cause the internet’s down (down down)

1.
Radio said this morning, a disaster in the news,
The internet that’s our everything, seems to have blown a fuse.
Cruisin the world wide wonderful, like a dog without a leash,
I look up at the morning sky, like a bird who’s been released

Repeat chorus

2.
Wi-fi, hi-def, you are gonna be my death,
Mobile data plan, stop redefining who I am.
Just ’cause you got a hammer don’t mean that I’m your nail.
You can be jack rabbit, I’m happy as a snail

Bridge (major key):
Passionate not rational,
Humans are illogical,
Physical not digital,
Half a glass is almost full.

Repeat chorus

Repeat v.2

(This message was last edited by tiller2 at 12:59 PM, Jun 26th, 2014)

tiller2
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Jun 26th, 2014 10:56 AM   Edit   Profile   Print Topic   Search Topic

tiller not sad nobody reads his song lyrics. Today new member of SAW... Songwriters' Association of Washington! ;^)

(This message was last edited by tiller2 at 01:02 PM, Jun 26th, 2014)

Martin G

Canada

Sep 18th, 2014 12:08 PM   Edit   Profile   Print Topic   Search Topic

I need to hear the music :(

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